hi mate - not sure opening works (the fade out seems forced); maybe 1 too many elements (possibly you could strip the track back a bit and play with melody patterns a bit to liven things up without needing to introduce more sounds)... even so, I listened to it twice in a row and it's not boring and moves along for 12 minutes each time. maybe just leave it for a bit, work on something else and come back fresh. but good sounds in there so don't ditch it.
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hi mate - not sure opening works (the fade out seems forced); maybe 1 too many elements (possibly you could strip the track back a bit and play with melody patterns a bit to liven things up without needing to introduce more sounds)... even so, I listened to it twice in a row and it's not boring and moves along for 12 minutes each time. maybe just leave it for a bit, work on something else and come back fresh. but good sounds in there so don't ditch it.